Take off the border on the text in the second one looks terrible. And the drop shadow on both.
Placement is poor, not really helping the flow
Overall text is pretty bad
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Not quite sure what you were going for with smudging on both on them.
Again no real flow in either of them.
BG are alright but not good either. and the render as slapped on not blended.
I feel like all im doing is being mean these days *sigh*
Posted on Thursday, 5th August 2010