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Started by Oza64 on 9:44pm 4/6/09. 189 views and 4 posts, 0 users reading, last post by Qweazy.

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Hey guys, have been doing a project for school in VisCom (Visual Communications)
We have to do the tempest which is a Shakespeare play (incredibly boring).

This is what i have so far



The top part in my opinion is finished, but the lower half is unfinished.
Any suggestions on what i should fill it with or do to make it look cool lol.

i know that the st.michaels logo is out of focus its just there for colour and reference also the 'textextextextextetxet' part is for the time and dates yet to be added in.

IMO text is fine and top half is fine, criticism for the whole image would be grateful
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Posted on Thursday, 4th June 2009
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sheild looks dodge
Posted on Thursday, 4th June 2009
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Quote from Oza64 on the 4th of June 2009:
[B]i know that the st.michaels logo is out of focus its just there for colour and reference[/B]
Posted on Thursday, 4th June 2009
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sheild looks dodge
Posted on Friday, 5th June 2009
 

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