Well, first off loving the depth buddy, really captured it beautifully.
You know i love all your work so i wont go into much cnc but i think you may have over sharpened his face/jacket. Not by much, just by 20 - 30 opacity lower.
Right the left of the text there is a flame/explosion thing going on that is exact same color as the text kind of taking so justice away from the text. Maybe lower the opacity of that flame of change the text placement.
Posted on Wednesday, 19th January 2011