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Started by slushie on 8:24pm 5/5/08. 1,507 views and 37 posts, 0 users reading, last post by N.E.E.T.

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hey guys, ive started lookign at hardstyle techno.. got one song, only new and not finished yet, but can you guys tell me whats good whats bad, if its terrible etc.

its Wave Dem Handz on www.myspace.com/slushmmz

thanks =]
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Sounds good.

I only really like one type of techno, and thats it there. Would like to here more

Keep it up.
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Quote from Zombie:
Sounds good.

I only really like one type of techno, and thats it there. Would like to here more

Keep it up.

thankss.. anything i can do to make it better? im thinking of adding some lyrics in well phrases anyway
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im not one for techno but sounds good dude.
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the fact its hardstyle is the bad part
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I actually use Reason 4 every day producing and playing around with songs, usually more trancey, hard trance stuff.

I think it sounds good, but you really need to work on transitions of sounds. The use of snares and a snare fill can be used in conjunction with crashes and reverse crashes to create a simple transition.

Just work more on the basics, and just a question, what program are you using.
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Yeh that was more trance, hardstyle is harder and faster.

What program did you use to make that fl studio or what?!

nice job
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www.myspace.com/djmacaz

Listen to sensation, My very first song i ever did. My work is way above that these days and that page hasn't been updated much recently, I think i did that mid last yr.

Trance/Techno

I'll try get a link to the new piece im working on. If i could be bothered.

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its ok for a first go
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yeah i use fl studio, just recently got a full version ok thanks for the tips insta
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Yeh that was more trance, hardstyle is harder and faster.

What program did you use to make that fl studio or what?!

nice job

He knows, Yeah that wasnt hard enough for hardstyle...None the less still catchy, More trance.
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less trance more bass and fasten it up
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Quote from _instakill:
I actually use Reason 4 every day producing and playing around with songs, usually more trancey, hard trance stuff.

I think it sounds good, but you really need to work on transitions of sounds. The use of snares and a snare fill can be used in conjunction with crashes and reverse crashes to create a simple transition.

Just work more on the basics, and just a question, what program are you using.

is reason a program where you can make your own samples? or do you use premades and just sequence?
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A few examples





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you go from 1 beat, to a completely different beat straight away, and doesnt sound very good. try mixing them in and making it flow
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