Quote from ApexjE on the 24th of January 2012:
its his first review, cut him some slack, he can only get better if people provide constructive criticism, not telling him to just give up...
1. Learn more about the product and its technical specs, the company behind it, related products, consumers and the market for the product. (Research)
2. Improve his writing so that the article flows, keeping the reader interested, fix his grammar and spelling, structure the review less like a book report and more like a review, provide greater detail and explain his opinions instead of just "this headset is good". (Learning)
3. Provide a concise and objective viewpoint, learn about competition, what is expected of the item and how well it fulfils its role, what makes a good item, common problems with related products and how this one avoids those, but also how it doesn't avoid some of them, intended purpose and audience of the product. (Application)
He did none of those things, that's why I didn't bother elaborating. Also it would seem you don't understand them either.
Edited once, 24/1/12 - 9:58pm.
Posted on Tuesday, 24th January 2012