Not enough contrast. I think there is too much blur. Should add more orange and blue glows/overlays, bring out the goggles more. The font needs some work, its always tricky finding the right placement and effects. Could need just a simple light drop shadow. Or move the character of too one side slightly and and have the text embedded into the rock. Then you gotta work on balance; anyway, you're the designer could you give us an updated version?
Posted on Thursday, 2nd February 2012